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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分51.0分
评语:

文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;采用了一些简单的从句;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,且要加强拼写检查。

用户练习作文:

conmunication Conmunication is the bridge to connect people. In our life, we all have many thinks in every thing. the think we must to share to others.so,in this time,we must use conmunicate to connect each other and talk to your friends. for exsample,in 2012, i was coming to a new comply , but when i was got at the comply ,i was late so that there were no chance to joining the interview. at this time,i explain to the interviewer that why i was late and want to have a meeting angin.at last ,i got a chance.in my mind ,i thanks for the conmunication which was got a chance for me and also get a chance for my life. we must use conmunication in any way to creative our perfect life.

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