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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分85.5分
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文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富。

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Advanced in technology, variety of electronic products are more and more common in people's daily life especially computers, the most common one. Besides, the development of computers are more exceed than social development. With the development of living standard, lots of people are no longer satisfied about the existing computer technologies so that they require better computer services as well as functions. Therefore, some people devote their whole life in improving computer technologies in order to cater the different requirements of people. What's more, computers are also change people's daily behaviors and make great influences in their daily life. They not only provide people more convenience in working but also make their life more colorful and meaningful. However, every coin has two sides. Some persons do not use computers correctly but bad ways making bad influences in society and individuals. To sum up, both computers and men have influences to each other. We ought to use computers wisely to make our world better and better.

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