2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Yes. I had a look just now. I found some of the exhibits of excellent quality and beautiful design. I feel we might be able to do a lot of business together. Sure we can. You know, we've been in this line for more than twenty years. So, Ms. Zhou, we're a newly-established company, but we have wide connections with wholesalers and retailers all over America. Good. We can hold more talks later on to iron out the details.