2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Online shopping has been increasingly importance to our day-to-day life. There is no deny fact that young people like online shopping more than old. however, just as every cion has two saids, online shopping an not except both has advantages and disadvantages. It is difficit to say that online shopping is good or not it general sa it denpends very much on the situation of people think online shopping is more convenient.