单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
I have a good friend. He is a ugly girl. He has short black hair, two small black eyes . His voice is better. He is no good at singing. He is a stupid boy. He don't likes reading books . He like playing computer games and chess. our classmates like he very much.