托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

作者词汇量积累不错，学术词汇积累较少；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays, it is harder and tougher for a common graduate student to get a well-paid jop in some metropolis such as Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou... not to mention they can afford to buy an apartment or a house without their parents' financial support. The price of house in big cities is always awkward for the youth. Some people usually buy houses away from urban area. Firstly, the price is not that high of than that in city. In addition, convenient traffic system and application of cars are available. They make it easier and faster to get to their destination. There are also some wealthy people choose to buy valleys in a rural area. They think the environment in city is too bad to stay. Rural area can not only provide them a better air condition, but also offer them some green and healthy food. As far as I am concerned, living in a rural place has many advantages, including less house price and high quality air condition; there are still some other benefits. With more people coming to live in rural area, the local area will be well planned, and traffic system will get be advanced. City dwellers tend to be more indifferent to each other’s life; it is a common thing that people living in the same mansion do not know each other. When you get some trouble in your apartment, you usually call the property management company to help rather than take some steps out and knock on your neighbor’s to ask them a favor. How sad it is. Last but not least, rural area, though it is not so colorful and wonderful comparing to the city life, offer people many opportunities. One can raise the healthy poultry and sell it to city dwellers. Organic vegetables are also very potential and have a bright economic future. Different people can enjoy different lifestyles as long as they like. Living in a rural area does really have a lot of advantages. But we still should pay enough attention to the protection of the environment in the rural place.