题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
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Tt is a very common pheonmenon in our today's society that lacking of trust among people ,not only among friend but also man and wife . Because of lacking of trust ,our life become more frustated ,people are living in situation of mutual suspicioun .Aa a consequesce ,more and more people realize the importance of trust .if you want to make friends or do some businesses ,first of all ,you are bound to give your trust to each other ,it is the basic and key for you to win and success .Then how can we builld and maintain trust ? Personally speaking ,we are supposed to be honest to others ,do not tell lies ,once you begin to tell a lie ,you will always tell lies to cover the lie .