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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第28篇:人们是否该做些他们根本不喜欢的事儿

发布时间:2013-08-13 17:22浏览次数:719
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

人们是否该做些他们根本不喜欢的事儿。给出原因并举出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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In recent days, there are two kinds of views has been debated. Some people think that sometimes we should do things that we do not enjoy doing. And other people think that we should not do things that we do not enjoy doing. My opinion is in favor of the first view that "People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing" . My reasons are as follows: First, I do not like to go to the hospital, but I had an infectious disease, if I do not go to hospital in time seeing a doctor, is likely to spread to my families and friends. I went to the hospital to ensure the health of my families and friends. Again for instance, we all know that housework is boring, never done. But we must complete housework for my families live in a clean and orderly environment. Second, the things of we do not enjoy may not no fun. We may try to discover the fun of the boring things. Sometimes something that we hate to do turn into something enjoyable. Just by trying it, we may begin to enjoy doing it. For example, students may dislike learning some subjects. They have to learn these subjects in order to graduate. Yet, we try to transformate a positive attitude to learn these subjects, may have unexpected harvest. Not everything in life is enjoyable. Unpleasants rasks are the essential component of life. We do not enjoy them, but we accomplish the anyway.

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