初中英语命题作文真题演练(90):school English

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用学术词汇；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段。

The show is very brilliant!It has a lot of interesting stories、some games and some english songs which are beautiful.I think it's very useful for us who can improve their english level and to realize more foreign culture.But it's not perfect beacause the intonation is a little quickly and the show just can broadcast twice a week.That's what I want to say.All in all, I hope the show can be more excellent!