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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10532
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识掌握的错误,可适当增加从句的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

I would like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude to those whose efforts have made this thesis possible. At the beginning, I owe my thanks to my supervisor, Prof. Hang Chuanmei, whose painstaking and insightful instruction has led me through the whole process of writing the thesis. She has spent much time reading trough each draft and provided me with inspiring advice patiently. Without her continuing directions and encouragement, this thesis would not have been possible and complete so smoothly. In the second place, I also owe my sincere gratitude to my friends and my fellow classmates who gave me much their help and time in suggesting and helping me work out my problems during the course of the thesis. Finally, special thanks should go to my parents, who have always been helping me out of difficulties and supporting without a word of complains, for their continuous support and encouragement.

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