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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10532
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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学术词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇量稍小;文中应增加从句和复合句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

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Louisa May Alcott, the American woman writer in the nineteenth century, is famous for her popular novel Little Women. Deeply influenced by Puritanism, Louisa May Alcott displays the doctrines of Puritanism in Little Women, demonstrating in the characteristics of the four girls. Little Women lies in the real domestic life of the Alcott’s and its reflection of the American Puritanism the Alcott girls received as depicted in the characteristic and experience of the March girls. The first chapter of this thesis introduces Louisa May Alcott’s life and literary career. The second chapter summarizes the critical reviews and approval ideas of Litter Women. The next chapter demonstrates the Puritanism reflected by American literature, describing the process of American Puritanism, the creeds of Puritanism and the reflection of that in different characteristics respectively. Chapter four is the conclusion, summarizing American Puritanism reflected in Litter Women.

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