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字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
As a student,it is a obligation for us to learn how to manage our wealthy,such as our money.So i support we should be a smart consumer. Now,we are still in the school,then the most of money come form our parants.However save money is necessary .In my life,With the limit economy,i must balence the gap between eating and shopping.Once the eating is over half,the shopping must be reduce.On the other hand ,the best thing of it is woo can learn a new the way to live--more economic and healthy. The way is so better,it is't?We need do it ,don't we?
