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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear KPOHsales, I'm very happy to meet you.My name is Hu Bin.I have learn your company new product which we are interested from the exhibition during the December 15th to 22th.So can you send us a piece of price list and instruction.At last ，thank you for your help，We believe we can establish business relationship. yours ：Hu Bin
