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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10532
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用学术词汇;作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段。

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Having own ethics, attitudes and ways of life, Puritans strongly stress the search of the liberty. Besides, they devote themselves into the hard working and labor with the optimism. These characteristics demonstrate the people who take the serious attitude towards the life and regard the industrious, earnest and pragmatism as the doctrines. In addition, Puritans firmly dedicated into the family and believe the family is the most indispensable part where shows the mutual respecting and love. Especially for women, they are put the position in which obey their husband at running the family all the time. What’s more, Puritans try their best to lead an extremely simple life with the optimistic attitude, who stress highly on the spiritual life, emphasized the self-discipline as well as morality. In order to survive in the unfamiliar environment smoothly, Puritans have to bear the responsibility to make a living with the innovative and brave spirits. Thanks to the clear goals of life, Puritans are typical pragmatists. They advocate the obedience to the God, stick to the morality, and respect the authority of the Bible. Puritans had a holy ideal, and they tended to think of themselves as God-chosen people living on the Promised Land. In order to fight new natural surroundings and to survive, puritans must have courage, boldness and adventurous spirit. They believed in liberty, property, success, happiness of life and a bright future. They got down to practical work diligently and optimistically. Puritans were pragmatists, and they had a strong sense of purpose. Puritans laid emphasis on spiritual life.

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