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Nowadays,the child become the king in the family,howeven,most parants help their kid to get into a happy life by doing anything for the kid. In China,independent is the traditional personality. Therefor,the child shold be independent.Parants could do those for them. At first ,set a good example.Try your best to do work. eveytime you need tell them,no pains no gains.Finishing work in time is the basic condition in independent. Then,teach themto keep a independent idea.Only the thoungt was built,the behaviours can be influent. Next,give more free.If you arrange all things,most of their will be reduce the motive to live,what more,they will be lost. Finally,somtimes, give them advice.