2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Now,with the development of the science and technology humans take the computer for important place.In paticular,the computer replaces the important meachines.Using the computer,people can do many unimpossible things. In the past,humans who were fall in love and lived in long distance want to meet each other immedietely.The fastest solution may only by telephone.But,now they can by computer.Using the computer onlines,they can chat and meet conveniently.When the man miss friends,he always write a letter in the past.However,it often takes a long time.Now,they can send an e-mail for their appreciation and missing. By computer,people often do many bad things.They attack official website to obtain the significant secret.It leads to war and harms to the society regulaitions.As to me,we should use the computer appropriately.Protect the regulations of the website.