托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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In our life, making decision is always a big problem for us. Beacuse we always can not know the different chooice can cause what kind of different results. So some people prefer making decision after doing some reaserch and asking someone else which dicision is better. But there are also other people who always make decision with their snap judgments. In my opinion, this two situation both have their advantages and disadvantages . For the first type of people, beacuse of their knowledge about the thing, they can know all most of the result that the chooice they choose will cause. It will let them prepare well for their future and sometimes maybe they can control the things what's going to happen. However, most people have a problem that they are always afraid of advanture and tough situation. When they know the decision they make will be a tough task for them, maybe at the back of their minds, they could get away from the decision and choose a easier one. On the other hand, the second kink of people may can not prepare for the future well, but they will be brave enough to make any decision that they think the thing good for them. But the bad situation is that they could be more tired than the person who thinks things completely. They will face much more problems than the first kind of people. Snap judgements sometimes are from the back of our minds, and it always tell ourselves what we really want to do, and the most important thing is that it's is only for ourselves and on one else. So in a word, it's not a real snap judgments, but it will be a snap judgments in others opinions. The way that can leat us to success is the idea that we own by oureselves. So the careful and snap judgments both are the best teacher for us.