托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富，学术词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

In our life, making a decision is always a major problem for us. Because we always cannot know the different choices can cause how different results. So some people prefer making a decision after doing some research and asking someone else which dicision is better. But there are also other people who always make a decision snaply. In my opinion, they both have their advantages and disadvantages . For the first type of people, beacuse of their knowledge of the things, they can know all most of the result that the choice they choose will cause. It will let them prepare well for their future and sometimes maybe they can control the things what's going to happen. However, most people have a problem that they are always afraid of adventure and tough situation. When they know the decision they make will be a tough task for them, maybe at the back of their minds, they could get away from the decision and choose an easier one. On the other hand, the second kink of people may cannot prepare for the future well, but they will be brave enough to make any decision that they think the thing good for them. But the bad situation is that they could be more tired than the person who thinks things completely. They will face much more problems than the first kind of people. Snap judgements sometimes are from the back of our minds, and it always tells ourselves what we really want to do. The most important thing is that it's is only for ourselves and no one else. So in a word, it's not a real snap judgments, but it will be a snap judgment in other opinions. The way that can leat us to success is the idea that we own by oureselves. So the careful and snap judgments both do good for us.