小学二年级英语作文:Our house

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Our house is in a very quiet wide open space,and the transport is very convenient.It's near the hospital and the supermarket. When you enter the house,you can see a big living room with big sofa and round table,also some green plants are besides the TV.The dining-room which blocked by the window-display is very clean.The kitchen is next to the dining-room,It's big and tidy. The bedroom is on the second floor.It's very nice,pink wall,pink curtain,a big bed with neat quit,and a big closet.There is a balcony in it,I can plant many peppers and cactis.when I feel tired I can read a book on an armchair or look the splendid view outside.Beside the bedroom is the washing room,and the exercise room which contains many exercise equipments.Exercise everyday will make me healthy.