2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇，但请认真检查词汇的拼写；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

It seems that we have beening concerntrating on education since our childhood.We receive the education from school,society,and our parents.All the people hope their children to be an educated person for a brighter future.So,it's time to answer the question “how much has education pay back us?" From the states above,it is obvourse to find that the higher education degree people get ,the lower unemployment rate they will face in the future.A person who does not finish his high school may be unemployed at a percentage of 14.1%.Meanwhile,the median earnings is relate to education degree.That is ,the more education you get,the more you may earn. Education is the most important thing for a country.Education improved people well.Then,the power of a nation improved.That's the power of education and how much education pay back to us.