2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

A famous saying goes :"a soider who doesn't want to be a general never to be a good soider". So does student. Everyone wants to be somebody , however , nothing succeeds without a strong will. Using your imagination to picture it in mind that you will be success someday. A strong will is a promissory note to success. Someone is meant to be a failure if he hasn't thonght about success in area or hasn't had a strong will. Having a strong will isn't enough to success .You have to process a strong and unshakeable will to accomplish great job.During your pursuitong . You are not suppose to change you will in anything utill your job is done. The same thing happens to students.Without hard-working.You don't have any possibility to do something.