2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(17):Life in the future

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Hello everybody, I'm going to say something about the life in the future.I have to say you will be rocked. With the rapid developement of medical,it is believed that people in the future will be able to have a life long to 120 years.And what bothers us most now will be perfectly solved,well ,that is the worrying about the energy.In the future,we will find a new kind of energy that won't cause any pollution or radiation.What's more,our regular life will have great changes.For instance,the robots can help you do chores and the chairs can transform its color with your clothes'colour.And the mobie phone will update,too,you can see each other when you are talking on the phone with it on your wrist.What excites me most is that we will have chance to take a new lift to go sightseeing in the space！ How I looking forward to the future life.