2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；复杂句的使用不是很丰富。

The computer was invented in 19st century .at that time ,the computer was not use so widely ,it was just use in compute and handle the great data.But nowaday ,it is used widely .the connection between computer and human become more and more close .But every thing has two coins ,including computer . On one hand ,after computer was invented by human ,it relieves the work of human in great extend .the computer may be take place human's job in the future ,because of the speed and quality are better than humans'.the present of computer ,take lots of facility in human's routine day. On the other hand ,computer can not replace human completely ,attribute to the computer must be control by human .with the development of technology and economy ,computer will be more personality ,and result of human will be more lazy and admitted in computer games or other funtions .it do harm to humans' health . At the all ,we should use computer in correct way .