题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
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computer and man Nowdays people use computer to sove many problems,such as to remember long numbers or anything else,because of computer's strong memories.And also,the computer games acctive many students.People become more and more relay on computer. In my opinion,although computer has many great function ,but it will never catch up with the brain of people.