2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；请注意分段。

computer and man Nowadays person use computer to solve many problems,such as remember long numbers or anything else,because of computer's strong memories.Also,the computer games active many students.Person become more and more relay on computer. In my opinion,although computer has many great function , it will never catch up with the brain of people.