题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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As the development of homo and more and more people don't want to trust anybody but himself.Even sometimes we may balieve a person we never rather our families or friends.This problem shuold apeal to all of us attention to come up with idear to slove. There are some reasons for this phnominon .First,some think that them with their families or friends have competive and conflict in benefit.Then,some parents may check their chids diary ,which have an serious impact in their childs' growth.Also girlfriend would check message or follow the tracks of their boyfriend have become comprehend .Last but not the list ,most of people believe stranger are always honest. Confront such problem we are so sensitive to believe others.We should be awear of the important of maintaining trust with each other .Because we are not the only one on the earth ,we should have families and make friends ,we have to learn to go along with by maintaining trust .Besides,if we want to success we must rely on others who we trust.