2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

Nowadays person uses computer to solve any problems,such as remembering long numbers or anything else,because of computer's strong memories. The computer games are activing more and more students.Persons become to relay on computer day by day suirusly. In my opinion,although computer has many functions ,it will never catch up with the brain of people.