题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
Nowadays person uses computer to solve any problems,such as remembering long numbers or anything else,because of computer's strong memories. The computer games are activing more and more students.Persons become to relay on computer day by day seriously. In my opinion,although computer has many functions ,it will never catch up with the brain of people.