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字数：300 满分：100分
恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；请注意分段。
If we did not save money,we will certainly become a poor man at last.But how can we use ways to save money including buying necessities?In my opinion,I wish I had economic methods to use money. At first,I will collect coupons in all the supermakets. Generally speaking,saving my money is not considered as a trouble thing.When you go to the supermaket or stores,you need a place absent from crowds and make up your mind to buy the thing that you really want.Your families would not apart you any more for your wise choices.
