一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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Today is sunday. I am very busy. In the moring, I help my mother to clean the house and wash clothes. And then, I do my homework. In the afternoon, I play pin-pen ball and Play the game with my father. At night,I watch TV. I get up at nine o'clock.What a nice day!