题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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in recent years,with the development of society,the standand of living is being higher,but the relationship between people is being indifferent especially the trust. 'on maintaining trust' has been the hot topic in the world. on the one hand,how can we maintain the trust ? for one thing ,trust is relationship that can not due to one of us .only do us try our best together,it could survive.if we don't trust our friends,of course,your friends are impossible believe in you.so, to maintain the trust,what we should do first is that believe others. on the other hand ,what trust can bring to us ?in fact,trust benefits us a lot such as friendship ,happiness and wealth.no trust no relationship.people all of the world would not to live as a individual person without trust.it is important for society that it is the basic of social activitiess even humen activitiess.