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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Just as the saying goes:Nothing succeeds without a strong will. People always have many beautiful dreams,such as being a doctor,a singer or a teacher.Whatever your dream is,you should work hard and try your best to achieve it someday. We are always ending up with nothing for we do not have a strong will.We usually give up when there is something difficult.So,if you want to be successful,you must have a strong will.For example,Luxun,he is such a respected man with strong will.He worked hard in his lifetime and never gave up.He put his idea into his works which changed a large of Chinese people.Without any doubt,he is a great person.And he makes us know that only people who have a strong will will succeed. It is same with our study.Only we study hard,can we get good grade and make our dreams come true day by day. On the contrary,if we do not have a strong will,we will failed and our lives will end up with nothing successful.
