2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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In social ,there are many goods being excessive packaging.some people are in favor in the idea of packaging ,they poin out the fact that goods being packaging will be more creative and have more attration . however other people are stand on diffirent ground ,they consider it harmful to packag excessive ,they firmly poin out that excessive packaging will puzzle people to choose quality commodity . there are some truth in both arguments.but ,i think , the most important side about comodity is quality rather than packaging ,i hope cerchant can pay more attantion on quality ,and give consumer good serves .