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拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
With the great development of sciences and technologies, our automobiles also give us more and more convenient to our daily life. It is amazing that nearly a century before people would never know that cars and airplanes can be found in every corner in the world to serve human's life. But by contrast the cars and the airplanes I hold a strong idea that the cars play a more important role in the society not only now but in the history also. Today, we almost can not live without a car.Cars are becoming more and more important for us.For ourselves, we use the car to have our study and work and sometimes we can drive a bit far to have a good visit. Drivers rely on their cars to live. For the factories they use cars to transport their cargo all around the world thus we can eat and use them. Where there can go a car there can have a better life. In the history of human, cars were invented much earlier than airplanes. When the Industry Revolution began people noticed that how carried such stuffs made by the factory away. When the first car was invented all the problems had been solved. So actually it was the car actually accelerated the process of the development of human society. Although we can also see lots of advantages of using airplanes such as more efficiency, they can not weaken the cars' role because they have less strain like need a big airport and more acute in short distance transport. And now a lot of countries regard the cars' amount as one of their economy's indicate. Like china today Someplace what to develop faster what they should do first is to build up road which can let cars in. We attribute the society's development to all the vehicles. But we can not deny that cars in the most important vehicles and have a greater effect than airplane does. And we will still see the cars effect more and more in human society.
