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as the contemporary society develops dramatically,internet has played an important role in the interpersonal cummunication.due to the phenomena different people hold on different attitude toward it . some people think the internet benefit us a lot.we don't have to look very far to find out the advantages of internet.for one thing ,it is so convenient for us that we can contact all of our friends by sending e-mails or chatting oline whether we are.moreover,peolple can make friends and get information from all of the world.what's more internet promote the globalization of interpersonal communication in a positive way. however,also some people don't think so.we can not deny that there are some underlying problems about internet.to begin with, with the increaseing number of people who are addicted to internet games ,some people think internet is harmful to us. worst of all ,internet makes people more indifferent than before and the associate between people becoming weaker. as far as i am concerned,there are more advantages than disadvantages in the use of internet.yet,different people hold on different views.but ,we must realize that internet itself is neither good nor bad for us.its value to interpersonal communication depends on how we use it.
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