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Puritanism is the practices and beliefs of puritans. The American puritans accept the doctrines and practices of predestination, original sin and total depravity, and limited atonement through a special infusion of grace from God. It also declares that solely out of his mercy, God selects or predestines certain persons to be saved in spite of their sins. But due to the grim struggle for living in the new continent, they become more and more practical. American Puritanism is so much a part of the national atmosphere rather than a set of tenets. Puritan theology is a kind of the version of Calvinism. After the break of Henry VIII and the Catholic Church in Rome, the Church of England became the tool for the king to maintain the whole, which the inner of the church still rotten. In the late sixteenth Century, some pious believers in church made some proposals to clean the residual factors of Catholics, thus their ideas are called "Puritan", and they are known as the Puritans. They regarded the belief in the New Testament as the only criterion. At the end of sixteenth Century, the Puritan groups divided into the two main factions, Presbyterian and Independents. The former one represents the interests of bourgeoisie and new nobility, advocating the establishment of a part of the national Presbyterian Church. The latter one represents the interest of the middle bourgeoisie and the new aristocracy, claiming that every parish should stand on their own position but against the doctrines of the church. “Puritan” is a name derived from the Latin word means “pure”. In practice terms, in 1620, a tremendous of puritans sailed on the Mayflower for New England. Then these English Puritans settled in North America, mainly in New England. They founded colonies and lived in their own ways of life in America. The Puritan's main purpose was to purify and glorify the Church of England and to make England a more religious country. Except that, the puritans emphasis on simplicity of worship, stress on religious earnestness, focus on austerity and self-denial, devoted to work and lifelong education, concern for spiritual condition, and pursuit for the high standards of morality. Moreover, most of Puritans who migrated to North America came in the decade 1630 to 1640 in what is known as the Great Migration. Puritanism, at its inception, was only a religious reform movement that developed within the English Protestant Church. The Puritans comprised by a group of Christian men, wishing to abide by the tenets of the Bible, so as to shape their lives in accordance to the will of God. They believed that they were the "chosen people of God", who were responsible for creating a perfect, utopian society. Puritanism was a religious movement in the 16th and 17th centuries, wherein a faction of English Protestants revolted against the teachings of their traditional Church, and set out to purify it off the remnants of the age-old Roman Catholic teachings and practices. One of the most striking features of this movement was that it was largely influenced by those who proclaimed themselves as "godly" or "religious professors". However, they were "hypocrites" for their opponents, who did not believe in their ideology of purifying the sacred doctrines of the Church. The name “Puritans”, which was given to them by their opponents, eventually became prevalent, and went on to become their official identity. The movement began in 16th century England, when some major groups displayed anti-Roman Catholic sentiments. Because of their conflicting principles with the orthodox Church of England (based on orthodox Roman Catholic teachings), the Puritans had to emigrate to New England, the Netherlands, Ireland, and Wales. All in all, they were staunch believers of the Holy Bible, and followed its doctrines as guidelines for leading a pious life. They were also strong believers of Calvinism, which loosely preaches that the consequences of our actions in the mortal world decide the fate of our souls.