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The Puritan's main purpose was to purify and glorify the Church of England and to make England a more religious country. Except that, the puritans emphasized on simplicity of worship, stressed on religious earnestness, focused on austerity and self-denial, devoted to work and lifelong education, concerned for spiritual condition, and pursued for the high standards of morality.
