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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Nowaday,the childern willing spend much more time to player than doing housework at home. However,there are some parents pay for money to child doing homework.do you think this is a good idea ? Facing this issue,it has both advantage and disadvantage.the advantage is let child know the money is not easy to earn,also can stimulate their saving money potential.but, the disadvantage is the child may igoner their study.instead of ,the child on the go to doing housework to earn more money,so that their can but whatever their want.
