2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Online shopping has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. There is no deny fact that young people like online shopping more than old peoples.however, just as every cion has two saids, online shoppig is not an unexcept it has both advantages and disadvantages. It is difficit to say that online shopping is good or not it genenral sa it denpends very much on the situation of people think the online shopping is more convenient.