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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6312
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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Trusting somebody and being trust are the most happy thing in the world.But how can we maintain trust for a long time even in our whole life time. As for me, honest must come first. Once a friend got a fake information from you and discovered that, he or she may feel sad and wondering why. A few time pass, the friend begin to suspect other information gained by the same way. At the same time, you are worried about the bad news happen. Between you two somgthing has change.The experience that you trust each other with no reasons has fade away. Stay honest forever. Only in this way we can keep our bones with people who we held for dear.In other word, we maintain trust by being honest.

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