题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Trusting somebody and being trust are the happiest thing in the world.But how can we maintain trust for a long time even in our whole lifetime. As for me, honest must come first. Once a friend got a fake information from you and discovered that, he or she may feel sad and wondering why. Few time pass, the friend begins to suspect other information gained by the same way. At the same time, you are worried about the bad news happen. Between you two something has changed.The experience that you trust each other with no reasons fade away. Puls, in business circle, we consumer can't easily believe what merchants have garauteeded. The children are taught not to trust the stranger even they are lost. All cases are the sequences of the prevalent of the dishonest. We are getting what we put in. in all, nothing is weighter than honest on maintaining trust. Only in this way we can keep our bones with people who we held for dear, moreover, the world become better place to live in. In other words, we maintain trust by being honest.