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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6292
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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Trusting somebody and being trust are the happiest thing in the world.But how can we maintain trust for a long time even in our whole lifetime. As for me, honest must come first. Once a friend got a fake information from you and discovered that, he or she may feel sad and wondering why. Few time pass, the friend begins to suspect other information gained by the same way. At the same time, you are worried about the bad news happen. Between you two something has changed.The experience that you trust each other with no reasons fade away. Puls, in business circle, we consumer can't easily believe what merchants have guaranteed. The children are taught not to trust the stranger even they are lost. All cases are the sequences of the prevalent of the dishonest. We are getting what we put in. In all, nothing is weighter than honest on maintaining trust. Only in this way we can keep our bones with people who we held for dear, moreover, the world becomes better place to live in.Trust is not something that can be buuild with quick by fix technique, it's something that cultivated through consistent habits in personal interaction. In other words, we maintain trust by being honest.

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