题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Trusting somebody and being trust are the happiest thing in the world.But the real world don't go around as we think. How can we maintain trust for a long time even in our whole lifetime. As for me, honest must come first. Following is an example. once a friend of yours got a fake information from you and discovered that, he or she may feel blue and wondering why. Few time pass, the friend begins to suspect other information gained by the same way. At the same time, you are worried about the bad news happen. Between you two something has changed.The experience that you trust each other with no reasons fade away. Puls, in business circle, we consumers can't easily believe what merchants have guaranteed. The children are taught not to trust the stranger even they are lost. All cases are the sequences of the prevalent of the dishonest. Now we are getting what we put in. In all, dishonest keep us from happiness.In corporate world, nothing is weighter than honest on maintaining trust. Only in this way we can keep our bones with people who we held for dear, moreover, the world becomes better place to live in. Trust is not something that can be build with quick by fix technique, it's something that is cultivated through consistent habits in personal interaction. In other words, we maintain trust by being honest to others.