2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

句子错误偏多，建议修改；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；学术词汇的使用希望还能更熟练一些，拼写检查还需加强；请注意分段。

As is vividly reveals in the picture,we could knew,with the education highter ,the Median weekly more highter,however,Unemployment rate more down. About this question,different people have different views,some people believe we should earn highter as soomn as possible,because,the education more highter,the salary more highter,ofcouse,more steady in the future.However,the others think it is not contact with future depend on education,the education more highter ,the unemployment rate more highter.i agree with fixed up these opinions,for example ,with the development of the society,more education could help our country more stronger,as about unemployment rate question,we should have a good opinions,just selection the top works not want to do some basic work,we should balance those opinions,do more basic work could as regard as solid foundation improve our future.