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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；句子错误偏多，建议修改；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；请注意分段。
As is vividly reveals in the picture,we could know,with the education higher ,the Median weekly more higher,however,Unemployment rate more down. About this question,different people have different views,some people believe we should earn higher as soon as possible,because,the education more higter,the salary more higher,ofouse,more steady in the future.However,the others think it is not contact with future depend on education,the education more highter ,the unemployment rate more highter.i agree with fixed up these opinions,for example ,with the development of the society,more education could help our country more stronger,as about unemployment rate question,we should have a good opinions,just selection the top works not want to do some basic work,we should balance those opinions,do more basic work could as regard as solid foundation improve our future.
