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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中句式变化多样，同时从句使用很棒；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误。
As is vividly reveals in the picture,we could know,the education more higher,the Median weekly more higher,however,Unemployment rate more worse. About this question,different people have different views,some people believe we should earn higher as soon as possible,because,the education more higer,the salary more higher,ofouse,more steady in the future.However,the others think it is not contact with future depend on education,the education more higher ,the unemployment rate more highter. I agree with fixed up these opinions,for example ,with the development of the society,more education could help our country more stronger,as about unemployment rate question,we should have a good opinions,just selection the top works not want to do some basic work,we should balance those opinions,do more basic work could as regard as solid foundation improve our future.
