2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中句式变化多样，同时从句使用很棒；文中词汇表达丰富度不足，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；副词使用偏多。

As is vividly reveals in the picture,we could know,the education more higher,the Median weekly more higher,however,Unemployment rate more dreadful. About this question,different people have different views,some people believe we should earn higher as soon as possible,because the education more higher,the salary more higher,ofouse,more steady in the future.However,the others think it is not contact with future depend on education,the education more higher ,the unemployment rate much more. I agree with fixed up these opinions,for example ,with the development of the society,more education could help our country more stronger,as about unemployment rate question,we should have some great opinions,just selection the top works not want to do some basic work,we should balance those opinions,do more basic work could have a solid foundation improve our work in the future.