2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；副词使用偏多。

As is vividly reveals in the picture,we could realize,the education mre higher,the Median weekly more higher,however,Unemployment rate more dreadful. About this question,different people have different views,some people believe we should earn higher as soon as possible the education more higher,the salary more higher,ofouse,more steady in the future.However,the others think it is not contact with future depend on education,the education much higher ,the unemployment much higher. I agree with fixed up these opinions,for example,with the development of the society,more education could help our country more stronger,as about unemployment questions,we should have some great opinions,just selection the top works not want to do some basic work,we should balance those opinions,do more basic work could have a solid foundation improve our work in the future.