2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；副词使用偏多。

As is vividly reveals in the picture,we could realize,the education mre higher,the Median weekly more higher,however,Unemployment rate more dreadful. About this question,different people have different views,some people believe we should earn higher as soon as possible the education more higher,the salary more higher,of course,more steady in the future.the other people think it is not contact with future depend on education,the education much higher,the unemployment much higher. I agree with fixed up these opinions,for example,with the development of the society,more education could help our country more stronger,as about unemployment questions,we should have some great opinions,just selection the top works not want to do some basic work,we should balance those opinions,do more basic work could have a solid foundation improve our work in the future.