小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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It is important for me that have a hard friendship.There is a friend of mine ,she is virtual in my life.She always come out ,encourage me when i am struggle with difficute .She is not stand out of look ,but her heart is pretty nice .She always help people ,give them love sunlight and smile.